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???: Chapter 34 Chapter 34: Soldiers of Fortune???: Chapter 34 by ~Crackerjackthe4th
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The road ahead was going to be much harder than anyone had deemed possible.
The campaign was just beginning, and troops from all over the system were being ported to the front lines.
Meanwhile, a lone vulpine packed and planned for the next step, stoic and contemplative. It had been years since his last tour with the Cornerian forces, and though he was well-trained for such a life, it would not be prudent to assume anyone would be ready for such a large scale counter attack.
A tattered photograph—a beaten memory—found its way into Fox's gloved hand. It was a young couple and their only chil
SoL: Chapter 33 Chapter 33: The Wolves Are Howling At Your DoorSoL: Chapter 33 by ~Crackerjackthe4th
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“Star Wolf!” Fox barked back. “I should have known you guys were involved!”
“~Heheh…are we ever anywhere else?~” Wolf chuckled, voice rumbling over the network. “~Venom’s like a second home by now, which means you’re on our turf now.~”
“~Hold your fire! There are pilots in the way!~” Somewhere, a captain was shouting at the cannon crew. By now Wolf and crew had caught up to the rest of the Cornerian forces, holding them up in front of their own ships. Any direct fire would mean a certain
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Be Human. [link]
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Good sir, that is an excellent argument, but I must offer a rebuttal: Please go fuck yourself with a cactus.
Gentleman Gangsta says: "DISREGARD THY LAW ENFORCEMENT PERSONNEL."
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Be Human. [link]
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Be Human. [link]
So yeah, it depends on the species.
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Good sir, that is an excellent argument, but I must offer a rebuttal: Please go fuck yourself with a cactus.
Gentleman Gangsta says: "DISREGARD THY LAW ENFORCEMENT PERSONNEL."
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Be Human. [link]
Fox is always shown to be pretty diminutive. Krystal would be, too, judging by certain proportions.
Really, though, there's no way of knowing. I'm just making my most educated guess.
And as to your other comment, I'd imagine bears to be much larger, and Tigers slightly more so.
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Good sir, that is an excellent argument, but I must offer a rebuttal: Please go fuck yourself with a cactus.
Gentleman Gangsta says: "DISREGARD THY LAW ENFORCEMENT PERSONNEL."
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Be Human. [link]
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"I reject your reality and subsitute my own!"
But I always imagined Lance to have one of those matrix style ankle length leather trenchcoats...I allways like those, they look cool. And maybe some sun glasses as well...
And not to criticize or anything, but I think that Fox would look cooler with a solemn look....deep in thought. Like eyes narrowed down a little bit, smile turned into a straight line across his muzzle. Combine that with a jacket and Fox would look bad-ass.
And now for the brutally honest constructive critiscism. Now I dont think I could draw any better man, but when I look at Lance, I notice that he doesn't seem to have a torso underneath the coattails of the jacket. And I think that you were trying to have Lance's legs pressed real close together, but it kinda didn't turn out how you expected it to look I think...it looks like Lance only has one leg...
In my personal opinion, I think that it would have looked better if Krystal and Lance were standing completely back to back; having Krystal completely facing towards the "camera", and Lance completely away from the "camera".
Like the only Parts of Lance you could see over Krystal are his wider leg stance, parts of his shoulders, and of course the back of his head. Krystal's poseing could essentially remain the same...but it makes me wonder what Krystal's hand is doing...it looks like it has a mind of its own, it looks like she had it on her hips, but it decided to do the opposite.
And some closing stuff, Krystal doesn't seem like the one to smirk, and her tail could be a little bit fluffier.
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Now this reads like a bunch of critisicm, but since you and I are alike, we dont like being spoon-fed shit like "Oh this is absolutly positivly THE best picture i have EVER seen!" *Fave!*
So I listed those out with complete seriousness and with the intentions of helping you avoid some problems in the future. You know me, and I really enjoyed analyzeing it and I loved looking at it. But lying isn't something I do (often anyways
There we go, honesty served.
ILF
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Pray for Japan and that its nuclear problems get solved. I hope that the Japanese people don't get *too* gung ho about shutting down their nuke power entirely... they just need to not put their stuff next to the sea.